In order to present a better understanding between the importance of good design to the reader's, I have done a comparison between my group presentation slides for the subject Issues in Publication and Design and what flaws it had and how I applied the theories of how to create a good document learned from various readings in my individual presentation.

One of the the mistake done in my group presentation was the inconsistency of color shade that was used as shown in the slides above. According to Singer (2002), color can be used for highlighting important points or issues however it must be used in moderation or as Neilsen (2008) states it will end up confusing the readers. I improved this mistake in my individual presentation whereby I limited my presentation slides to only have maximum 3 colors which are white, black and purple.

One more mistake done in the group presentation is the wrong usage of proportion which refers to the size and placement of text and graphics on a page. Reep (2006) states that equal amount of space given for text and visuals is rarely used as this will interfere with the reader's ability to use the document because the information will look cramped. In my group presentation, it is visible that the same design is used page after page.


Therefore, I changed the layout in my individual presentation so that it does not look monotonous. (Reep, 2006)


In conclusion, this minor changes in my individual presentation will actually help my audience to get a better understanding and idea on what I am presenting.
First Steps in Digital Design, Page One Publishing, Singapore.
Reep, DC 2006, Technical Writing: Principles, Strategies, and Readings, 6th edn, Pearson Education, USA.
Neilsen, J 2008 , viewed 13th April 2009,
www.useit.com/alertbox/applicationmistakes.html
Schriver, K,A, 1997, Chapter 6 in Dynamics in Document design:Creating Text For Readers', Wiley Computer Publisher, New York
Singer, D 2002, Ten steps to document design,University of Alabama, viewed 14th April 2009,
www.uah.edu/colleges/liberal/english/shared/doc_des_singer.htm